I was born in Taunggyi, the Capital of Shan State, Myanmar. I am interested in Civil Engineering field since young. After completing high school in Taunggyi, Myanmar, I came to study in Ngee Ann Polytechnic, Singapore. I studied Civil and Environmental Engineering Diploma Course in Ngee Ann. During Polytechnic days, I involved in many CCA activities such as helping out in community services and school events, joined NP swimming team and other clubs.Currently, I am pursuing my Civil Engineering Degree in National University of Singapore. My other interests are reading fiction books, swimming, travelling around, home decorating etc.
Saturday, October 18, 2008
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You could probably describe more on your school life in Myanmar, or compare the style of education between Myanmar and Singapore. Also, you can talk about what you have gained from joining the CCA activities, such as communication skills or teamwork. I believe you enjoyed your polytechnic days judging from the numerous activities you participated in! I really miss my secondary school and junior college life!
I agree with Kai Ling that you may describe more about your life in your hometown. By so doing, firstly, it can provide more information about your background so that the readers can know you better. Secondly, it can make your biodata more interesting since the mystery of your hometown may attract the readers' attention.
I agree with Zheng Ning. I think people would be curious about your hometown and want to read on to find out more.
Your biodata shows that you are an all-rounder and a caring person, having involved in many CCAs and helping out in community services.
Maybe you can also elaborate more on the home decorating part, for example how did you cultivate this interest, etc.
If I were you, I would attempt to be more specific in the CCAs I particpated in and the contributions I made to the CCAs. You may want to have a go at sentence variations and probably look out for some grammar slips. Your biodata is systematic in a chronological way, giving others a clear view of how your life is like. =)
It is very interesting biodata. Since you mentioned about the past before university, I think you can say some more about it. What's more, you mentioned about your interests and CCA at last. Maybe you want to say some more about it, or delete that some part and emphases more about one part?
Thanks, Nang, for giving us quite an informative biodata despite the word constraint of 100 words. Do be careful of your tenses eg. "I am interested in Civil Engineering field since young." Should use the present perfect instead of the present tense. Similarly, there's a problem with your verb in the fifth sentence starting with "During Polytechnic days, I..."
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